My Zoomout story

On the 10th April we played the Zoomout Game as part of the blogging challenge.. This is a follow up post. The Zoomout Game is when you add an image to your blog, and start a story in the comment section. Other classmates add to your story in the comment section. Finally we had to create a story from what people said in the comments.

These are the comments made by the people on my blog

1.The wolf got lost in the snow when it was young and now it is trying to find its pack again.

2.The journey has been a long one. Suddenly he sees wolves coming his way.

3. He tries to hide.

4. He was was so white that he could hide in the snow and intruders wouldn't see him.

5. As the pack got closer he moved back. "Snap" went a bear trap and the wolf howled in pain.

6. The pack rushed up and then the one said, "Look it is our long lost cub. Let's free him and get him home to get well again. The wolf was so happy!


This is the story I made from the comments.

The Lost Wolf

This is a story of a lost wolf. It all started when he was young he was wondering around at night in the full moon. One night he saw a group of bears running towards his pack.His mother said he must run and save himself, so he did what he was told. As he got to a safe place he could hear the wailing and the crying of the wolves.

As he grew up he had to hunt for himself and find shelter, but he is still haunted by that night. He  wandered around the snowy forest to see if there was any food and that's when he heard what he was always afraid of...bears. As soon as he heard them he ran and ran and ran far away, but they seemed to follow him. As he got deep into the forest...SNAP! His paw got trapped in one of the bear traps and he yelped in pain. You could see the blood dripping from his leg and he carried on crying.

He could hear the bears paws crunching in the white snow as they took each step closer and closer and closer. Then, something unusual happened. There was something running fast behind the bears and then he saw that it was.....another pack of wolves He was so happy that he started to howl. He saw how they attacked the bears to save him, but after a few seconds the bears ran away and far away until they couldn't be seen. When the lost wolf saw the other wolves he was so happy, but he saw that he couldn't get to them because of the trap. He was sad. Then he saw another unusual thing. He saw a human walking towards him. The human helped him set him free. He bandaged his woulnds and let him go to his new wolf pack.              

THE END